Essay Mini Series: How to Write the “Personality” Essay

The “Personality” essay is one of the most fun and sometimes most challenging prompts on a college application. In this episode of the Essay Mini Series, Moon Prep counselors Nicole and Amanda explore how students can showcase who they are beyond grades, test scores, and accomplishments.

Nicole and Amanda emphasize that the Personality essay is a chance to let individuality shine. Admissions officers want to see authentic voice, humor, curiosity, and the traits that make a student unique. This is the moment to highlight interests, quirks, and perspectives that might not fit anywhere else in the application.

Throughout the episode, listeners learn strategies for choosing anecdotes that reveal character, whether through hobbies, life experiences, or small moments that speak volumes. Nicole and Amanda also provide guidance on tone, cautioning against trying too hard to impress or overloading the essay with unrelated details.

The discussion touches on common pitfalls, such as writing what you think admissions officers want to hear rather than what truly represents you, or relying solely on accomplishments instead of personality-driven stories. The counselors stress that strong essays combine self-awareness, authenticity, and reflection, creating a narrative that feels both engaging and memorable.

For students who struggle with self-expression, this episode offers reassurance and practical tips. The Personality essay is an opportunity to show that beyond academic achievement lies a thoughtful, dynamic, and relatable individual, exactly the kind of student colleges are excited to admit.

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